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Snowflake Chandeliers

snowflake chandeliers
twinkling spiral air travel
ends, melted on tongues

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Rose dew (Haiku)

Enwrapped by sunlight
between prickly rose thorns
- morning dew glistens

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Misty Daisies (Haiku)

A misty light fog
hiding spring daisies in bloom
lifts with dawns sunrise

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Writing Haiku Best Practices

I have read a lot of Haiku lately that do not even look like haiku anymore. I guess these “modern” haiku do not have to follow any rules or best practices other then the 5-7-5 syllable format. A Haiku is a “formatted” Japanese form or poetry. I feel that taking away that formatting, no longer makes it a haiku.

These are the rules and best practices that I follow when writing my Haiku,

    Obviously the 5-7-5 syllable format.
    I feel a haiku should be about nature and contain “season” words.
    I feel a haiku should not contain metaphors or similes -
    As the play on words takes away from the haiku simplicity.
    I feel a haiku should describe a single moment
    I feel a haiku should use words like a, the, as, of, as little as possible.
    I feel each line of a haiku should be relative to the other lines on some way.
    I feel the last line of a haiku should be a “striking” or an “enlightening” line.
    The three lines of a haiku should not rhyme.

These are the best practices I try to conform to when writing my haiku. If you have any comments or questions about this, feel free to comment.

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Once Caterpillar (Haiku)

Cocoon breaks open,
sky-blue painted wings emerge
- metamorphosis

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Lake Reflections (Haiku)

Below snow capped peaks
an emerald forest blooms
- clear lake reflections

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Whiskers (Haiku)

Rustling sounds draw near
The tall thick grass moves apart
Whiskers of a fox

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Perfectly in place (Haiku)

Soft and glistening
blankets of snow have fallen
perfectly in place

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Autumn scene (Haiku)

Warm colorful leaves
tremble at crisp autumn winds
- Pumpkin sits below

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