Snowflake Chandeliers
snowflake chandeliers
twinkling spiral air travel
ends, melted on tongues
snowflake chandeliers
twinkling spiral air travel
ends, melted on tongues
Enwrapped by sunlight
between prickly rose thorns
- morning dew glistens
A misty light fog
hiding spring daisies in bloom
lifts with dawns sunrise
I have read a lot of Haiku lately that do not even look like haiku anymore. I guess these “modern” haiku do not have to follow any rules or best practices other then the 5-7-5 syllable format. A Haiku is a “formatted” Japanese form or poetry. I feel that taking away that formatting, no longer makes it a haiku.
These are the rules and best practices that I follow when writing my Haiku,
These are the best practices I try to conform to when writing my haiku. If you have any comments or questions about this, feel free to comment.
Cocoon breaks open,
sky-blue painted wings emerge
- metamorphosis
Below snow capped peaks
an emerald forest blooms
- clear lake reflections
Rustling sounds draw near
The tall thick grass moves apart
Whiskers of a fox
Soft and glistening
blankets of snow have fallen
perfectly in place
Warm colorful leaves
tremble at crisp autumn winds
- Pumpkin sits below