Abusive army of ego’s
Battle of Selfish Pride
Suppressing friendly fire,
where unlike minds collide
Arrogant soldiers fighting
for me, myself, and my
Self centered civil war
The killing fields of I
Submitting to none, in your
conceited combat campaign
Pretending to be perfect
Really, you’re full of pain
Selfish tears descend inside,
so you slice your pulsing vein
You conclude your lonely life
Slouching over, self slain

There you sit in deathly silence,
Victim of your own dumb violence.
A spare couplet I had lying around seems to have found its perfect match:-)
Nice write.
Glenn
Hi Glen, Thanks for the complimenting couplet! Yes, violence seems to always rebound itself, so much that the violater violates himself.