You Make a Difference
You make more difference then you know.
You create the spark,
which grows into a flame,
that then flickers and spreads,
eventually turning into deep burning coals,
kindling the world.
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You make more difference then you know.
You create the spark,
which grows into a flame,
that then flickers and spreads,
eventually turning into deep burning coals,
kindling the world.
14 Responses
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19. October 2006 um 20:22
Clean, good, inspiring poem. Yes. …know, spark, flame, spreads, coals, world.
20. October 2006 um 07:31
Thank you David, it’s not my best, but I thought it may be motivating.
21. October 2006 um 08:41
only true friends will leave a footprint on your heart. Don’t know who said this, but it was the first thing that came up when reading this poem.
22. October 2006 um 00:57
I really like this one. A keeper!
27. October 2006 um 11:45
Travis, this is nice and motivating. The fire symbology is energizing! I think I’d actually like this poem better without its explanatory first line. And change the “the” to “a” in the new first line. It’s a very clear analogy of our deep significance. Thanks for this. - Mike
27. October 2006 um 15:24
Mike, Thank you for your valuable suggestion and comment! I agree, and may make the change!
4. November 2006 um 01:43
How I love your poetic words
12. November 2006 um 04:28
Precious words for souls. Thanks for sharing your inspiring words.
This is a beautiful blog, and I’ll be checking back often.
18. November 2006 um 05:03
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18. November 2006 um 09:12
Quite lovely and true as sunlight :) Thank you for the inspiring words.
Peace and Many Blessings!
18. January 2007 um 21:23
[...] Only with my eyes, my hands, my mind, can I really touch your soul. [...]
3. January 2008 um 15:04
short yet speaks volumes
3. January 2008 um 23:02
I come back and still love these words
4. January 2008 um 00:19
Nasra, nice to see you again. I am happy you are inspired.