You Make a Difference
Thursday, October 19th, 2006
You make more difference then you know.
You create the spark,
which grows into a flame,
that then flickers and spreads,
eventually turning into deep burning coals,
kindling the world.
You make more difference then you know.
You create the spark,
which grows into a flame,
that then flickers and spreads,
eventually turning into deep burning coals,
kindling the world.
Clean, good, inspiring poem. Yes. …know, spark, flame, spreads, coals, world.
Thank you David, it’s not my best, but I thought it may be motivating.
only true friends will leave a footprint on your heart. Don’t know who said this, but it was the first thing that came up when reading this poem.
I really like this one. A keeper!
Travis, this is nice and motivating. The fire symbology is energizing! I think I’d actually like this poem better without its explanatory first line. And change the “the” to “a” in the new first line. It’s a very clear analogy of our deep significance. Thanks for this. – Mike
Mike, Thank you for your valuable suggestion and comment! I agree, and may make the change!
How I love your poetic words
Precious words for souls. Thanks for sharing your inspiring words.
This is a beautiful blog, and I’ll be checking back often.
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Quite lovely and true as sunlight :) Thank you for the inspiring words.
Peace and Many Blessings!
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short yet speaks volumes
I come back and still love these words
Nasra, nice to see you again. I am happy you are inspired.