http://www.travisjmorgan.com/blog/2006/06/23/heartbeats-away/ Portfolio and Journal Thu, 29 Jul 2010 18:05:29 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9 hourly 1 http://www.travisjmorgan.com/blog/2006/06/23/heartbeats-away/#comment-565 don iannone Sat, 24 Jun 2006 15:48:27 +0000 http://www.travisjmorgan.com/blog/?p=208#comment-565 Travis...wonderful use of mouth and face in this poem. Very nice. Travis…wonderful use of mouth and face in this poem. Very nice.

]]> http://www.travisjmorgan.com/blog/2006/06/23/heartbeats-away/#comment-563 Glenn Sat, 24 Jun 2006 10:41:57 +0000 http://www.travisjmorgan.com/blog/?p=208#comment-563 I like the tie up at the surprise ending (heartbeat/pace pacemaker etc) .. could I suggest that it would read better as heartbeat paces away? Just feels to me like there should be one last heartbeat and the image of a single heartbeat wandering off seems more poignant? I like the tie up at the surprise ending (heartbeat/pace pacemaker etc) .. could I suggest that it would read better as heartbeat paces away? Just feels to me like there should be one last heartbeat and the image of a single heartbeat wandering off seems more poignant?

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