3 FEEDBACKS

1. abhay says:

   June 19, 2006 at 9:31 am

   This often happens and I think this Senryu existed in the affairs of human beings, men and women eternally. Great you have given words!
   Best wishes!
2. Travis says:

   June 19, 2006 at 9:34 am

   Thank you abhay! I’m glad you were able to recognize this is a Senry?. The last line is a “satori” which I feel gives this senry? its punch.
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   October 19, 2006 at 5:21 pm

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